First draft: feedback

After viewing the first draft of our coursework piece, we were given feedback from every other group.

Feedback was mainly positive, however depending on the improvements we have to make changes to our video. This feedback we aren't able to change, as that would mean re-shooting our piece and we are unable to do so.

This feedback is constructive as we can easily change the titles to make them closer together. It is understandable to change them as the credit and name of person were a few seconds apart and so didn't connect very well.

This is simple to achieve because we have some more time to think of music to make. The scream seeming unrealistic is difficult to re-record because it really was part of the scene and it was Kelsey's scream as we filmed. We won't change this, but can create better music that sounds better than what we already have.

The feedback we received is helpful because the changes we make can end up seeming like better decisions to us and also help us make improvements to make it look more professional.